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Even though I can’t see you
I know that you are there
To always help me through
When I am in despair

I wish you were here
©2008-2009 ~RockLeeRoxs
:iconrockleeroxs:

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Well I wrote this poem for a project at school and I really like it it is about my grandpa

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:iconskipidusk:
yay! the first poem that isn't angry like
:iconthe-sannin-rox:
I think it's very sweet.
And it rhymes!
But I guess rhyming doesn't matter too much when it's something truly heartfelt :shrug:

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'Hey woodwinds!"
"Yo!"
"Shut up!"
-Waconia Brass
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"Friendship is like peeing you're pants. Everyone can see it, but only you get that warm fuzzy feeling that trickles down your leg."
-David
:iconrockleeroxs:
I know I can't believe that it actually rhymes but yeah and you know how long it took my to write this it took my like an hour but yeah thank you

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AHAHAH!!!
OMG WHAT?
I ate them out of order
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Frosted cheerios are my herios
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even though so far apart ik ur here inside my heart the distance long through toil and shame it feels so good to hear ur name
:iconrockleeroxs:
I know but and it rhymes to its amazing oh and thanks for the fav on it

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AHAHAH!!!
OMG WHAT?
I ate them out of order
---
Frosted cheerios are my herios
---
even though so far apart ik ur here inside my heart the distance long through toil and shame it feels so good to hear ur name
:iconcheapwhiiskey:
it's beautiful
i love it, short and sweet.
i feel the same way about my grandpa too
and this reminds me, that i do have a poem about my gramps too! -runs off to find it-

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the darkest night till the dawn -
velvetcatch@last.fm
:iconrockleeroxs:
oh thank you so much!! and I would love to see your poem if I can cuz yeah

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AHAHAH!!!
OMG WHAT?
I ate them out of order
---
Frosted cheerios are my herios
---
even though so far apart ik ur here inside my heart the distance long through toil and shame it feels so good to hear ur name
:icondesdinovaraj:
its really nice :-)

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There are no impossible dreams
There are no invisible seams
Each night when the day is through
I dont ask much
:iconrockleeroxs:
thanks a lot!!!

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AHAHAH!!!
OMG WHAT?
I ate them out of order
---
Frosted cheerios are my herios
---
even though so far apart ik ur here inside my heart the distance long through toil and shame it feels so good to hear ur name

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